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    Noah was at the Blue note working his regular shift when a guy out of nowhere shot him. Noah fell and was transported to the hospital. Sam his father was the first one there.
    S: Noah buddy wake up. How is he Eve?
    E: I am not really sure at the moment. We will have to wait and see
    N: (he groans) What happened? Where am I? Are u my doctor?
    E: Noah u don't know who I am
    N: No and I don't know who you are either. (he points at sam)
    S: Eve whats going on
    E: He must have gotten amnesia
    S: Noah I am yur dad
    N: You are
    S: Yes
    Eve examined him and then Paloma came running in
    P: Whats going on?
    S: Paloma Dr. Russell is examing him
    10 minutes later Eve directed them outside to talk to them
    E: Alright Noah has amnesia. He doesn't remember what happened at all. All I want u two to do is remind him of things and just go on as normal. I am sure he will come around
    S: Thanks
    P: Thanks but when can he come home
    E: Tomorrow
    Paloma went inside
    P: Noah
    N: Hey who are u
    P: I am yur girlfriend
    N: Cool I got a girlfriend.
    P: Um tomorrow I will come and pick u up and we will go to the Crane Mansion we will be comfortable there. We live there.
    N: Ok so see you tomorrow.
    P: ok sleep good
    She left and picked him up at nine that morning.
    P: Hey u ready
    N: yea just give me a second
    he got dressed and they left. She gave him the details on the ride home. That she was a cop and how close they were and they arrived. They got out and went upstairs. She had to work that night.
    P: Well I gotta go to work so i will see you tomorrow morning. make yurself at home. Theresa my sister and my mom Pilar are here so just ask if u need anything. Go see yur dad if you want so see ya later. she left. Noah went upstairs and got inot bed he was tired.
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    I hope some read this tell me if its good so far

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    Ch.2
    Noah woke up to the smell of something smelling amazing. So he got out of bed and went downstairs.
    N: What smells so good he called out
    T: I am making dinner
    Noah came down and saw Theresa and Theresa saw him
    N: Oh hi
    T: Um I am paloma's sister
    N: Ok hi. What are u making
    T: dinner u want some
    N: Sure I would love some
    Theresa dished him out a plate
    T: So how are u feeling
    N: Alright I guess
    T: oh well i know u got into that accident and all
    N: I don't remember it at all though
    A little later on they were laughing and talking when paloma came through the door
    p: I'm home
    T: We're in here
    Theresa and Noah were sitting at the table talking and laughing
    N: Hello
    P: Noah, Theresa
    T: How was work sis
    P: Fine Noah u ready
    N: For what
    P: I am tired and I want to go to bed and shower its late
    N: I'm not ready for bed
    P: Fine I will see you later then
    N: I'll be up
    Paloma went upstairs
    T: Noah maybe u should go up she misses u
    N: Nah she'll be fine
    T: Well its late and i need to go to work early tomorrow so night
    N: I had a great time
    T: Me too. you are going upstairs right
    N: Yea I just want a drink
    T: Grab whatever night
    N: Night
    he watched her go upstairs and went upstairs himself. paloma just got out of the shower Noah was in bed.
    P: Oh geez u scared me
    N: sorry
    P: No its ok I am glad ur up here
    N: Oh
    P: Did u have a good night
    N: I guess so
    P: Well I am tired I gotta work tomorrow but I was figuring we could go out tomorrow. Is that alright?
    N: sure I guess so
    P: Ok well goodnight
    She kissed him on the forehead. he pulled back
    P: Sorry did i scare you
    N: No u surprised me
    P: Ok well can I kiss you
    N: On the cheek
    She kissed his cheek and went to bed. He dremt of Theresa that night he really liked her.
    CH.3
    Paloma got up the next morning before Noah did and went to work. Noah woke up at 7 and went downstairs.
    N: I thought that wonderful smell was breakfast
    T: Oh Noah don't do that
    N: Did i scare you
    T: A little
    N: U going to work
    T: yea
    N: U need help I would love to help you
    T: Noah thats alright
    N: please
    She couldn't resist that smile. It made her instantly melt. She had to keep her emotions inside this was her sisters boyfriend.
    T: Alright Noah
    N: Ok let me get dressed and write paloma a note just in case
    He was dressed in 10 minutes.
    N: I am ready
    T: Alright lets go
    They arrived at her office
    N: Wow amazing
    T: Yea it is
    Theresa showed him what she did and he helped her with some ideas. She was impressed. This wasn't the Noah she was used too.
    Back at the mansion Paloma had come home for lunch to surprise Noah. Then she saw his note it read: Paloma, I went to help Theresa at work. Sorry if I am not at home. See ya later tonight. Noah
    So she went over to Theresa's office.
    T: Noah thats a wonderful idea
    N: is it really
    T: yea that would help business improve a lot
    N: Good U know i do need a job
    T: Well hey ask Paloma what she thinks
    N: yea it would be fun working side by side all day
    P: Noah what are u talking about
    N: Theresa offered me a job
    T: If its ok with you
    P: I guess so
    T: Well good Noah u can start now
    N: Great
    P: We are still going out tonght right
    N: if I get home in time
    P: I hope so See ya later
    N: Sure
    Noah didn;t get out in time. It was late when they did get done
    N: Hey Theresa (noah asked as they were leaving)
    T: Yea Noah
    N: Um do u want to get a bite to eat
    T: Um its late
    N: please
    T: I guess so (she couldn't resist that smile)
    They went to a local place and got a bite to eat. They started playing music.
    N: U want to dance
    T: Noah
    N: Come on Theresa (he grabbed her hand) he loved the feel of her body next to his
    T: Noah we shouldn't be dancing
    N: Theresa we aren't doing anything wrong
    T: Paloma should be dancing with you she is yur girlfriend
    N: I don't remember her I like u
    T: Noah
    N: I like spending time with you
    T: (she pushed away) I can't do this to my sister
    N: Look Paloma is a nice girl I am sure but I don't like her
    T: U don't even know her maybe if u tried a little...
    N: I am trying and i like you a lot
    T: Listen don't come to work anymore if this is the way its going to be alright
    N: U just hired me
    T: Well yur fired
    N: Theresa come on I need this job
    T: Ok but Noah no funny business
    N: Ok ok lets go home
    T: Sounds good to me
    When they got home they went their seperate ways. He got into bed with paloma she didn't move and there was a note it read: Noah I have the day off tomorrow we can do something tomorrow. Theresa will let u have the day off I will explain. love ya, Paloma. He would give paloma a try. he went to bed and thought of ways to get Theresa to like him back. He dremt of her.
    In Theresa's room she was furious. How dare he try to make a move for her when he very well knew he was with Paloma. Although she did like him. She could resist that smile. Just thinking of it made her knees weak. She got into bed and all she could think of was Noah even though she knew how wrong it was she couldn't help herself.

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    Ch4
    The next morning Noah got up early. Paloma wasn;t in bed and he went downstairs.
    P: hey sleepyjhead i was telling Theresa u weren't going to work with her
    N: oh ok
    T: Its fine Noah (even though she wouldn;t admit she was a bit dissapointed)
    P: Ok Noah I got quite a day planned
    N: Ok
    P: Why don't u get dressed and we'll get started
    N: alright
    Noah got in the shower and got dressed and met Paloma downstairs.
    P Come on
    First they went to his dad's house and visited. Then they had a picinic in the park.
    P: Isn't this the perfect day to have a picinic
    N:Yea
    P: Noah is something the matter
    N: No why
    P:Well u seem distant with me u just answer with yes or no don't u like me
    N: Paloma i don't remember you thats all
    P:Well u seem pretty at ease with my sister
    N: I don;t know she's easy to talk too
    P: Whats that supossed to mean I'm now
    N: No i don't know its hard to explain
    P: Try me
    N: Paloma come on lets go for a walk. (he didn't want to tell her the truth that he liked Theresa and he had to admit he wasn't trying)
    The walk was different they walked by the ocean and he even joked around a little bit and he pushed her jokinly and she was laughing. Then Paloma took him to by Miguel's house and they talked while Paloma talked to his sister
    K: Hows he doing
    P: Well at first he acted funny when we went on a picinic but now he's acting like himself again
    K: He just needed a little push
    P: Theresa and him have been spending some time together I thought he liked her at first
    K: Come on Paloma Noah likes you he just needs some time and lets admit it Theresa is a pretty amazing person and she's nice. She yur sister though so she wouldn't do that to you she loves you
    P: Yea maybe yur right I just worry. I mean I love him so much.
    K: He loves you Paloma I know it
    They left and went to a movie and they shared icecream at the end of the movie. He joked around with her and even shoved icecream in her face but wiped it off with a napkin. This was the Noah she knew. They ran into Theresa and Jared at the end of the night.
    P: Hey Sis hi Jared
    N: Hey Guys
    T: Oh hey Noah this is Jared
    P: Jared and her have been seeing each other off and on
    N: oh ok
    T: Hey Noah I am going to have my driver come get u for work tomorrow I am spending the night with jared so I will see ya tomorrow at 8.
    N: Alright whatever (he walked away)
    T: Whats his deal
    P: I don't know see ya later. Noah wait whats wrong
    N: Nothing at all
    P: Noah come on what is it
    N: Nothing Paloma I Just don't like that guy
    P: What come on Jared
    N: Yes he just doesn't seem like a very good guy
    P: Noah they have been seeing each other off and on for about a year nothing serious has happened yet but Theresa deserves someone whats the big deal who she dates anyways
    N: She's yur sister and i am yur boyfriend right i just worry about yur family thats all
    P: Ok she said but wasn't convinced.
    They went home and went to bed,. Noah couldn't sleep all the thought about was Theresa and Jared and her kissing. It made him sick.
    Back at Jareds. jared was kissing Theresa
    J: This is the best part of the night
    T: Why
    J: Its just u and me
    They ended up making love. Theresa felt guilty because she thought of Noah the whole time.

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    Ch.5
    Noah woke up the next morning and got into the limo that picked him up. He left before Paloma was even up. he arrived to work and went straight to Theresa's office.
    N: Theresa I'm here.
    T: Good I had some ideas
    N: Cool so how was yur date last night
    T: Hmm it was great Jared's a good guy you to might get along. How was your day with my sister?
    N: Well I let myself enjoy her and we had fun but thats it. Paloma told me Jared and you are on and off again whats up with that.
    T: I don't know but he is such a romantic guy but I don't know if he's really my type.
    N: So romantic guy aren't yur type
    T: Thats not what i am saying Jared and me are just too alike. Like you would know what romantic is anyways
    N: I do know what romantic is
    T: Right don't make me laugh
    N: Ok fine you know what I have a propostion for you. You go out on a date with me and I will show u what its like to be romantic and if I'm right u have to go on a second date with me.
    T: Ok what if i win
    N: Its yur choice even though that won't happen
    T: Ok u have to go on a real date with Paloma
    N: Deal
    They shook on it
    T: When and where
    N: U pick
    T: Ok tomorrow night
    N: Good idea 7
    T: Sounds good
    N: Wear something fancy
    T: Ok now lets get to work
    They worked on a bunch of ideas and then work ended and he went home. Paloma was at the kitchen table sipping tea
    P: Hey you guys want some tea
    T: Sure sis
    N: Its ok I'm good
    They all sat down and talked
    P: Hey Noah lets go out tomorrow night
    N: Um...
    T: We have a business dinner tomorrow with some new clients sorry
    P: oh thats alright
    T: Ok
    P: We can do it some other time
    N: Yea he said
    Noah got a bite to eat and went upstairs to bed with Paloma. They were lying in bed staring at the ceiling when Paloma kissed Noah. He didn't fight it either she was a great kisser. When she pulled away he asked
    N: What was that for
    P: Noah I miss the old u. U still kiss like the old you but i want you back. The tender way you touched me when we made love it was great.
    N: Sorry Paloma i just don't remember. I don't want to hurt your feelings.
    P: I know she said
    She kissed him again. Then she pulled away
    P: Good night Noah
    N: Night Paloma
    The next morning he had the day and off and so did Theresa. Paloma kissed Noah before she went to work. Theresa and him had breakfast
    N: You ready for tonight
    T: Noah u act like its a big deal
    N: Well it is to me
    T: Alright
    They ate in silence. They passed each other all day that day. In the halls and in the living room. Seven finally came. Noah was downstairs when Theresa came down the steps. She was in a short black strapless dress. Noah took one look at her and his mouth hung open. She looked so sexy.
    N: Dang you are a knockout
    T: Yur not bad yurself.
    He kissed her cheek. He wanted to kiss her lips but held hmiself back. Noah took her to a candle light dinner. Then they went for a walk on the beach and talked about differnt things and opened up to each other. Then they went dancing on the beack
    N: So is this not romantic for you
    T: This is really romantic so i guess i have to go on another date with u
    He never answered her and he kissed her and to his surprise she kissed him back. She had wanted to for awhile now and she did. He finally pulled away and they got into the limo. They kissed all the way home. Things got really hot and heavy. Then she pulled away.
    T: Noah no we can't
    N: Theresa come on
    T: Noah I can' do this to my sister
    N: Don't stop now
    T: I can;t i'm sorry
    They pulled up to the house and Theresa ran in. Noah went inside by himself hot bothered and frustrated. He didn't go to bed for awhile that night.

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    Before he did go to bed he left Theresa a note. he had to make things better. Theresa got up that morning and there was a rose on her end table and a note by her bed. She opened the note it read: Theresa, I am sorry that i kissed u. Wait no I am not sorry about that but I love you. I am falling hard and fast for you. Please don't be angry and u still owe me a second date. We need to talk. We can go today at 6. Talk to ya later. I will not be at work today. Theresa smiled got up and went to work. Noah woke up at 8. He woke Paloma up.
    N: Paloma
    P: What is it Noah
    N: Do u have to work today?
    P: No tonight
    N: U want to get some breakfast
    P: I would love that I know just the place
    They got ready and left. Paloma took them to the place they had their first date at
    P: Noah do u remember this place
    N: Not really
    P: Well this is the place u took us on our first date
    N: oh ok
    They ordered and had a good breakfast. Noah and Paloma took a walk and they held hands but that was it. Then they went home. Paloma had to get dressed and she was leaving early. She had some things to do. She kissed him on the lips and left. Theresa came home at 5.
    T: Ok Noah whats going on
    N: I think we need to talk go change we are going out
    T: Why
    N: Well we still have that second date and maybe we should be in public so things don't get out of hand.
    She didn't say a word. She got dressed and came downstairs. They went to the Blue note where he used to work. People that he didn't know greeted him. They took a seat.
    T: So lets talk
    N: No I want something to eat
    T: Alright
    They ordered and Noah started talking
    N: Theresa I ...
    His cell rang
    N: Hold on hello
    P: Noah its me
    N: Yea
    P: Um i have some news I have to go out of town for a couple days on some important police work so I have to leave tonight.
    N: ok
    P: Where are u
    N: The blue note
    P: Oh well I will see u in a couple days and I will call you
    N: Alright
    P: I am glad you are out and about it might help u get yur memory back
    N: Ok talk to ya later
    P: yep
    He hung up
    N: Anyways
    T: Who was that
    N: Paloma she is going out of town
    There food arrived
    N: Theresa I can't go on like this everytime i see you its just such a major turn on. I can't stop myself from kissing you its hard.
    T: Noah what about Paloma
    N: She is sweet and shes hot but she not what i want
    T: Noah i will not do this to my sister she loves you i can't do it
    N: Follow your heart you like me
    She looked at him
    T: Yes but i can't
    N: Ok well then do me a favor dance with me
    T: Alright
    They got on the dance floor and danced. He held her close. He loved the feel of her close to him. Pressing up agaist him made matters worse. He was whispering in her ear. It gave her chills down her spine. Then he kissed her softly and she didn't object. she led him out the door and into the limo. When they got inside she straddled him they continued kissing. the limo driver stopped and he picked her up and carried her upstairs.
    T: Noah come on I want you
    N: I want you too
    They got into her bedroom and lied her down
    T: Do we have protection?
    N: No i don't have anything
    T: No here I do
    She handed him the condom and he put it on. he kissed every inch of her until her nor she could stand it. They made love without a care in the world and fell asleep in each others arms.

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    The next morning Noah woke up to Theresa kissing his ear. They made love again and got up and got dressed. Theresa didn't end up going to work. Her and Noah couldn't get enough of each other.
    T: God Noah your amazing
    N: No you are
    They were in their own little world. Until Paloma called that night
    P: Hey Noah how are you
    N: Good what about you
    P: Alright
    N: Cool
    P: Um i think i will be home in about a week
    N: Ok he said (he tried not to sound too happy)
    P: Ok well i gotta go love ya bye
    He just hung up
    T: Was that Paloma
    N: Yep
    T: Oh god Noah what happens when she comes back
    N: We'll think of something
    T: Good because now i don't think i can be away from you
    The next morning Noah and her went to the office and jared was there.
    T: Jared whats up?
    J: Nothing I wanted to see you tonight
    T: Um no we need to talk. Noah can u excuse us
    N: Yes (he walked out the door)
    T: I have fallen for someone else
    J: Who
    T: Nevermind who i just don't think its a good idea to see each other anymore
    J: Theresa come on
    T: No jared i mean it
    J: Well if u change yur mind i am still here.
    he left and Noah came in
    T: I ended things with him
    N: I will have to do the same with Paloma
    T: I don't want to do this to her she's my sister.
    N: I know I know
    T: God I feel terriable. We need to get to work
    They worked and went home and made love. They were crazy for each other.

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    Ch.8
    Theresa got up the next morning earlier than usual to drink tea. She felt awful about sleeping with Noah and doing that to her sister. She was crazy about noah. she sat and sipped tea for awhile. Then Noah came down
    N: Theresa i was starting to feel lonely in bed.
    T: Sorry
    N: Whats up
    T: I feel awful about what i am doing to my sister
    N: I know and Paloma is a nice girl but I am so crazy about u
    He kisses her and Noah made her stand up and lied her down on the kitchen table.
    T: noah don't we need something
    N: I don't want to run upstairs and spoil the moment.
    T: I don't want to get pregant
    He kissed her again
    T: Noah please
    He picked her up and intended to carry her upstairs and got distracted and they ended up making love on the floor
    T: God you are incrediable.
    N: Yea that was great yur incrediable
    T: We need to stop being so careless i don't want to end up pregant
    N: I wouldn't mind having kids with you
    T: I don't think Paloma would be too thrilled
    N: Probably not
    Noah went upstairs to shower and Theresa went to work. Noah stayed home an extra day he wanted to go see hid dad.
    he thought maybe he could talk to him about what was going on. He knocked on his dad's door. His dad answered.
    S: Noah what a nice surprise
    N: Hey dad
    S: Come in do u want something to eat or drink
    N: No I am fine can I talk to u
    S: Of course u always can
    N: Well Paloma is out of town for a while and Theresa and I have devolped feelings for each other.
    S: What u know u r supposed to be with Paloma
    N: I know but were crazy about each other
    S: Well then I think u need to tell Paloma I mean thats all u can do or at least try to be with Paloma
    N: Dad I tried I really did but i couldn't stop thinking about Theresa she was on my mind constantly.
    S: well the best thing to do is to be honest. How does Theresa feel?
    N: Awful she hates betraying her sister but she says she's crazy about me and ditto for me too
    S: Let Paloma down gently
    N: I know
    They talked for a little while longer and he went home. Paloma called about 10 minutes later
    P: Hey Noah how are u
    N: Alright how about u
    P: ready to come home i miss u
    He didn't comment to that
    N: So when u coming home
    P: Um in about 2 to 3 days
    N: Oh ok
    He was going to tell her he needed to talk to her but didn't have the heart to. They talked for a few more minutes and let her go. he watched tv and waited fot Theresa to come home.

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